Rin-Shelter

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So to start this critique I'd like to praise your basic shading and coloring. While not perfect it looks very nice and flattering. For suggestions that it would be best for you to focus on currently, I would say line art and your anatomy. Depending on the style you're attempting to create you can either have the perfect smooth lines, or the sketchy style. Best to choose one and work to improve it, and you can do that by actually going out and attempting to draw some realism (people, scenery, items ect). Hard stuff first then working your way to the style of your choice. All in all this is a VERY cute piece, and I cant wait to see more out of you. If you have any questions, your welcome to ask.